i really like this one, its something different. the colors are good, but just a lil bit of constructive criticism:
is the stool supposed to be lined up w/ the bar? b/c if so, the bottom is off just a lil bit.
Great pose! The proportions are a bit out of whack, particularly the ribcage. Make the ribcage a bit larger and it would be perfect.
I particualrly like the face. the hair, expression and makeup are all done very well.